Pat from Quartzsite said: January 6, 2012 1:58 pm PST
Finished your interesting book today. I was disturbed by the awkward phrasing, mistakes in grammar and punctuation, and additions which seemed to have nothing to do with the main story, but after reading your credentials, I began to wonder if these mistakes were on purpose as part of your "voice". I would really like to know if this is the case. If not, a professional editor would have been worth the money so that your story would be more polished. Wishing you a bright future, Pat